Nice.
If you squint hard enough, I started mine with a bit of unintentional conflict. It opens on the MC's coffee maker, and the first line of dialogue is the MC's roommate's boyfriend's saying "I'm gonna go make some tea." Get it? He's a tea drinker; she's a coffee drinker--there's going to be some problems.
Well, okay, I think I only found it amusing because the roommate and roommate's boyfriend were thrown in their purely for my own entertainment, and reading the way that was set up made me realize that I should have known from the start that my roommate's boyfriend and I would not get along. =)
Wasn't really an error, but I found it unintentionally funny (though I'm probably the only one).
Speaking of coffee...
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