Chronicles of an Apocalyptic-Indie-Romance

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Tavia Stewart

101 pages

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Posted
April 5, 2008 - 10:57am

Chronicles of an Apocalyptic-Indie-Romance

When I told Chris Baty about the script my writing partner, Geography (aka Sarah), and I were planning to write this April, he asked some pretty tough questions:

“So, is this more of a nail-biting, edge-of-your-seat kind of film, or is this is a quirky indie-romance? What’s your focus?”

It seems obvious enough to Sarah and I that we're focusing on both. The script has all the elements of a Terminator 2-type apocalypse film (the ticking clock, the race to save the world, chaos and mass hysteria, etc.), and everything you might need for an Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind-ish modern romance. The universe is collapsing along with the lives of our characters, and though they are from completely different walks of life, they have to find each other, fall in love, and work to overcome their weaknesses in order to save the world only to find . . . well, I am certainly not going to tell you that!

Anyway, Chris asked that I chronicle the ups and downs of writing such a complex script with a partner.

At this point, I cannot imagine how anything could possibly go wrong!

I say this as I knock furiously on wood, but I’ve got a brilliant and patient writing partner, and together we’ve filled out character worksheets (including one for the universe), broken down our plot outline by page, and we’ve met all our writing goals so far. To give you an idea of how excited we are about our script, ourselves, and each other, here is a short email exchange from yesterday:

Tavia: “It’s like watching our most favorite movie but better because it's ours and we're awesome.”

Sarah: “We're brilliant. I can't wait for tomorrow! I hope that you're not wishing you'd partnered with Charlie Kaufman instead.”

I guess you could call this our scriptwriting partner honeymoon phase. But then again, this is just from my perspective—Sarah, how do you feel about this first week of writing?

Sarah: Well, Tavia, I'm glad you asked. If days one and two are any indication, we are well on our way to becoming the world's most wildly successful screenwriting power-couple.

Writing with a wise and hilarious partner makes every step of the process joyful. Where alone I would otherwise be second-guessing my first pages already, or second-guessing the words before I even put them down, I now write with confidence. I know we're on the right track when we are both thinking of the same insignificant details (the universe should be blue!) at the same time. This totally eliminates the need to quibble over who came up with what brilliant one-liner or entire concept, because we've each been able to make the story our own, from scene to soundtrack.

I look at our script the same way I look at our team-up: One genre and one writer would do, but two is more fun! While some folks might say we are throwing caution to the wind, I say: Why not make an action movie in the style of a rom-com, a film noir set at Disneyland? Why not make the movies of our dreams? Let the honeymoon-phase live on!

Well there you have it. We sure do like to pat each other (and ourselves) on the backs!

Oh the glories of week one. We’ll be checking back in next week with more from “Chronicles of an Apocalyptic-Indie-Romance” in week two.

Extras:

  • Tag lines we’ve come up with this week: Nail-bitingly cute!, Cutely nail-biting!, and “Relax. It is not as if the universe is collapsing . . . but it is.”
  • Soundtrack Song of the Week: R.E.M., The End World As We Know It (And I Feel Fine)
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    Tavia Stewart
    Managing Editor and Young Writers Program Director
    Script Frenzy

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Golden Ticket for Script Frenzy Donors
Tavia Stewart

101 pages

Staff

Posted
April 14, 2008 - 10:26am

RE: Chronicles of an Apocalyptic-Indie-Romance Part Two

Quantum Tornados of Hypothetical Moments

This is the second installment in the saga of my Script Frenzy 2008 script. You can read the first installment here

This week my writing partner Sarah and I discovered why Week One was so full of wonderment and high fives! Just like a three-year-old giddily banging a Lego space ship against the floor until it becomes a mine field of sharp-edged Lego bits, we found writing about emotional and universal destruction to be not only easy, but fun in a morbid-toddler kind of way.

Unfortunately, all that fun had a price. We began Week Two with a script full of problems with absolutely no idea how to solve them. This became very clear to me on Thursday when our characters were sitting in a café sipping coffee and discussing the infinite possibilities of the universe instead of falling in love and saving the world from its imminent collapse.

Though we needed to cover some of the science behind our apocalypse, I was beginning to feel like our script was becoming a NOVA special. At one point during our Thursday writing session, I realized that I didn’t even understand the science of my own script (most of which we made up), and that I was getting more and more anxious to get to the make-out scenes. Instead of communicating my frustrations like the grown adult that I am, I decided to go the passive-aggressive route and communicate my frustration through one of our main characters:

Me: I don’t think Isobel likes Benjamin right now.

Sarah: Is it Isobel or is it you that doesn’t like Benjamin right now.

The good news is that Friday's writing session went much better! Though we didn’t get to solving any problems, things actually happened. By tweaking the Being John Malkovich portal idea into something we call a Quantum Tornado of Hypothetical Moments, we were able to show multiple paths that our characters’ lives could take simultaneously. They got absolutely nowhere, but we sure had fun writing them into circles. And having fun, my friends, is what Script Frenzy is all about!

If you would like to learn a little bit more about fictionalized, amateur quantum physics, you can read our script here! We found out early this week that is was public!

Getting somewhere is for Week Three.

We hope.

Signing off for now,
Tavia