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An Excerpt from What You Can't See
FADE IN: EXT. WAREHOUSE DISTRICT - NIGHT CARLOS ORTEZ Did you think we were so stupid we didn’t know? That you cops are so f-----g smart you can sneak right in to our little hideout? (He laughs and the other gang member follow suit) How stupid are you? You know what happens next. We show no mercy to cops. Especially not lying, stinking undercover cops. (he deals another solid blow, this time to the gut. CARLOS ORTEZ DAN Please, Carlos. No More. No mas. CARLOS ORTEZ DAN looks up, wary. CARLOS ORTEZ DAN reacts to this. Shakes his head, no. CARLOS ORTEZ DAN shakes his head, mumbles something incoherent. CARLOS ORTEZ looks angry, fed up. Kicks DAN in the side. Tell me what you know, damn it! Why do you want her to suffer what Ruiz and Juan will do to her? Just tell me what you know. It’s easy. You save her. You die anyway. What does it matter? DAN is agonizing over this decision. His face is contorted with pain. Low voice Don’t hurt her! She doesn’t know anything. CARLOS ORTEZ looks pleased. Then tell me what you know. See – I have my phone out, I’ll call them. No worry. Just talk. Now! CARLOS holds up phone, punches some numbers. Phone rings. He puts it on speaker. Ruiz? You there, man? O.S. RUIZ Yeah, man. We’re here. So’s the bitch. CARLOS Good. Someone here wants to talk to her. Put her on. |
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