Oh, I know this one. Me! Me!
Well, I sort of know this one...
It's one scene.
There's an example of this in the short film script GOD in the downloads section on John August's blog. I've also watched the actual film (a short on his THE NINES DVD).
At scene 28, bottom of page 10. He just writes something like "Margaret is on phone. various positions."
The film shows her and does these overlaps from one position to the other, showing the passage of time. Very cool. The content is done with a VO (which doesn't sound like what you want.
What you've got looks like it would work.
Saipanwriter
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