So i finally wrote the last few scenes of my screenplay. i need to start editing and would like to get feedback on my script. anyone willing to read it and cut it to pieces??

the screenplay is a story-behind-the-story version of Rapunzel.

thanks!

I have got quite a bit of free time on my hands this summer, and your plot sounds interesting. I've done some editing in the past, mostly for friends and a literary magazine that I work on, so I think that I'd do well with this. (At least, I hope so. I promise to do my utmost.) I'd be happy to help.
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There's manga. And then there's a social life. Guess which I choose?

it's posted on project central on celtx. here's the link:

http://pc.celtx.com/search?q=tower+view&c=&o=rel

if you can't access it that way, just email me and i'll send you the pdf.

plumeriaflower@yahoo.com

I can access it. I'll get to work.
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There's manga. And then there's a social life. Guess which I choose?