Hey everyone! I've run across a minor snag in planning and I was wondering if I could garner some advice here.
In the book I'm working from, my character tends to imagine himself saying/doing something really cool, and then you see him say/do something far less cool. It doesn't move the plot along per se, so it wouldn't be a big loss if it were cut, but it does add to the comedic value of the script so I'd love to keep it if possible to add to the characterization.
My problem is I'm adapting to the stage (far less versatile than the screen in terms of special effects), so I'm wondering if you have any ideas on how to execute this in a way that makes it clear what's happening?
(x-posted to Stage Plays)
I am Atlas in an extremely cheaply rented replacement body.
--Eirean Bradley
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