Dudes of all types! Gather to help out a poor sister!

Anna-sama

Posted
April 4, 2009 - 04:45

Dudes of all types! Gather to help out a poor sister!

Ok, i'm writig a stage play to shakethings up a bit, but my buddie wants me to help her with her comic, (which i'm all to happy to do! I love this stuff! it is my heart and soul!)
but i have no idea how to format this thing!
HELP!
I have no idea if i should do 4-square, or something a little more complicated.
Its about a happy bouncy emo girl who falls in love with a girl-phobic poem boy.

....come to think of it...is there some way to mix the two?....
I don't know....SHINE A LIGHT! ANYTHING!

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FalStarr

18 pages

Posted
April 4, 2009 - 05:15

RE: Dudes of all types! Gather to help out a poor sister!

Um...

Well, I'd like to help you but you haven't given much to go on.
Write the script first, then worry about paneling.

It seems more like it would work as a generically paneled comic to me though. So 4 or 6 squares would cut it.

Or better yet, think comic STRIP instead. Like Johnny the Homicidal Maniac.

-cestmonmuse

11 pages

Posted
April 5, 2009 - 04:05

RE: Dudes of all types! Gather to help out a poor sister!

Well, generally, you have to decide on what you're gonna make the story be about. If it's gonna be an extremely romantic story, don't go for 4-panels, you'll limit yourself too much. In that case, it would obviously have to be a shoujo with the very vague panel divides.

If it's mainly a commedy and romance is just a backdrop, then use the 4-panels by all means, but keep in mind that you can't develop a plot very well with 4-panels (which are called yonkoma, btw) and you'll have to be able to come up with a gag line for each and every yonkoma you write.

Then, maybe it's a romance, but you want to make it a romance geared more towards a sort of neither particularly male nor female audience. In that case, you'd want to go for a more shonen look to the panels. Mainly it's a bad idea to use shonen-style panels unless you're going to have a lot of action, cuz otherwise they end up being too uniform-looking. You could also do a style of paneling that's not really shonen or shoujo. The best example I can think of this is Kiyohiko Azuma's "Yotsuba&!" which you can find here: www.koiwai.biz.

Or maybe I'm just rambling on pointlessly because you don't want it to be manga-style at all, but I assumed you did cuz you mentioned yonkoma, but just shut me up now if you didn't.

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