42 pages for something very action heavy in a TV format where there is actually 43 minutes after commercials is bare minimum, maybe a little too short. I saw a Stargate: Atlantis script on eBay that was 43 pages. I think that episode had a lot of running back and forth and waiting for the bad guy to come into view so there was a lot where three words of action might have been a minute of screen time (and David Hewlett didn't have much dialogue - fast talker, there).
If it's a pilot, you sometimes take a little extra space introducing the appearance of sets, etc., so I'd expect a pilot to be longer because of that.
I have come in around 42 pages before for an existing show and it probably is too light and I would add something if I could, but the story is told at 42 pages. The show also has some quiet transition moments so a director can fudge the timing based on that. However, I already write very leanly. There isn't much that should need to be cut out once the director has a go at it. I start the scenes late and end them early and tons of dialogue is assumed to have happened off-screen. If your writing has some chatty areas already, especially at the beginning and ends of scenes, that'll get cut and shorten your script.
J. Michael Straczynski's Babylon 5 scripts would come in around 40-some pages and, even, then, comparing them to episodes, beginning dialogue would often be cut and they were less action-filled than you'd expect so that's an example of directors being able to get the timing to work out right. However, if a show is being written for today's TV, the pacing is expected to be faster so I think they would prefer to have more wiggle room by having a longer script.
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