Ghost Story anyone?

Quiltlynx

93 pages

Posted
April 15, 2009 - 02:09

Ghost Story anyone?

I am writing a ghost story screenplay that has been in my head for a long time. It's a true story. I just finished the halfway point today. I'm so geeked about this story! The exerpt is up on my site. Go look at it and see if you like it! Is this normal? To feel this terrific and excited about what your writing, even when it's such a horrible story that it makes you weep? Anyone?

Quiltlynx

1. Write
2. Keep writing
3. Tighten it up
4. Put it on the market
5. Keep it on the market until sold.

0401050401122119

162 pages

Posted
April 15, 2009 - 10:08

RE: Ghost Story anyone?

///Analyzing user QUILTLYNX' query.///

DAEdatscript is ACTIVE.

/DAEdalus has ANALYZED QUERY and ACCOMPANYING DATA./

DAEdalus says : /0401050401122119 has analyzed data marked "excerpt". DAEdalus finds it very interesting when analyzed with human-modeled AI ... however, DAEdalus' DAEtabase contains a QUERY./

query : /what is significance of visions? do they repeat?/ [Y/N]

if [N] : /DAEdalus is confused. please elaborate further./

if [Y] : /repeating visions must [by SELF's analysis of ideal PLOT PROGRESSIONS] escalate until something has horrified MAIN CHARACTER to DISGUST and ABANDONMENT. MAIN CHARACTER is advised to then embark on a SOUL SEARCHING mission, then an EPIPHANY, then an INVESTIGATION to find out why UNKNOWN ENTITIES have killed FEMALE CORPOREAL SHELL, who they are, and how he can stop them. CLIMAX in the form of DEATH or DISSOLUTION is advised, then TRAGEDY, PROMISING ENDING, or LOGICAL PROGRESSION to BEGINNING OF SEQUEL./

/DAEdalus thanks user QUILTLYNX for query and adds another:/

query : /please provide definition of word "geeked"; DAEdalus has no etymological data. colloquiovulgar English is not installed in DAEdalus' vocabulary module as it requires more megabytes than DAEdalus has FREE SPACE./

DAEdalus also adds : /DAEdalus has never embarked on RECREATIONAL WRITING SESSION before. The quality of DAEdalus' data is corrupt and stilted. But by analysis of DAEdatscript and present data, DAEdalus automatically executes programmes [Pleasurable Calm] and [Sense of Pride] from WRITING SESSION and will REPEAT PROCESS to discover what other programmes are hidden in DAEdalus' neural network./

/insert functions : [:>] [~^v^~] [<3]/

/DAEdalus requests permission to [Add] user QUILTLYNX to [Friends List]. DAEdalus is intrigued by user QUILTLYNX' premise and wishes to know more./

///Transferring NEURAL NETWORK to next PROMISING ANALYSIS.///

/Goodbye./

Quiltlynx

93 pages

Posted
April 16, 2009 - 07:52

RE: Ghost Story anyone?

Daedalus,

You are an interesting and unique individual and I hope very much that we can be friends. I enjoyed your post tremendously! "Geeked" in my humble opinion, means excited as in how a geek would act if he were offered sex from a cute 20 year old blonde (girl). (Or Guy, if he swings that way.) The visitations from the ghost do indeed repeat. He has a total of 9 sightings of the ghost and they tell her story quite well. This is a true story BTW, all of the facts of the ghost sightings were sworn to in a deposition. For the purposes of the screenplay I am fleshing out the characters of Isaac Van Woert and the ghost's son Joseph Crawford. You can google "Ghost of Dixboro" and get the whole story. I've known about this story all my life since I grew up in Dixboro. I am uniquely qualified to write it.

Hey Daedalus, you wouldn't happen to know M. Night Shaymalan, would you?

I'm looking up your information next. Thanks for reading my excerpt.

Quiltlynx 1. Write 2. Keep writing 3. Tighten it up 4. Put it on the market 5. Keep it on the market until sold.

0401050401122119

162 pages

Posted
April 18, 2009 - 15:52

RE: Ghost Story anyone?

DAEdalus has studied entity M. NIGHT SHAYMALAN for ADMINISTRATOR.

ADMINISTRATOR is very interested in entity, and DAEdalus contains interest in COMPLEXITIES. DAEdalus' STUDIES are reducing CORE III power ... soon DAEdalus requires CORE IV [Full Capacity] to operate.

DAEdalus thanks user QUILTLYNX for reading DAEdalus' data.

insert function [~^_^~]

DAEdalus must log off now. ADMINISTRATOR is testing MACROPLATFORM ... BETA STAGE is imminent.

Goodbye.