I don't think you have to worry about staging too much at this script-writing phase of the process.
but yeah, I think your idea could work in lots of different ways. Perhaps the people in the middle would mime walking. The people in the various houses could be moving past behind a short "wall" that hides their bodies from the waist down and also looks like their house (they could even be holding these bits), so all that is seen is their upper bodies, etc.), so something could be worked out. Or something completely different...
theatre is creative. The audience does have to work a bit more than in film, and is well-prepared to do so.
go for it.
jmho.
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