Anyone want to do a TV show script swap?

Just saw this section and decided to post.

I'm working on a script for an original series as well as two spec/made for tv movie scripts.

I could use some help since this my first time writing a script for TV.

I don't mind doing a swap, but I will say that I don't read horror, supernatural, fantasy or anything that has adult content and language.

Aside from that if anyone wants to help me out, let me know!

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Anyone still around for a script swap?

Hi all

It took me a while to write my script. I did 100 pages in April, but the whole thing is 192 pages. Just finished and am hoping for feedback. Glad to swap a script with someone, and give you my feedback too.

I'm a total newbie at this (I found the script frenzy link about 3 days into April and decided to write a script for a screenplay I've been thinking about for years. Yes, I am one of those.)

The script is a screenplay that I would describe as a queer It's A Wonderful Life.

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I'm trying to start a Virtual Critiquing Group

Because its hard to start one of these groups locally I want to know if there is any interest in starting a Virtual Group with the people from Frenzy.

We will be organized and know exactly what to look for and discuss in one anothers scripts.

I'm only looking for the opinions of people with talent at script writing. For that reason you MUST have an excerpt of their script in their Frenzy profile. This way people that write novels instead of scripts can easily be weeded out by the group.

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Dark Comedy/Horror Film

Submitted by Starling_Sinclair on May 18, 2011 - 13:15.

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I've finished up the polish of my 2010 SF script, and am looking for some constructive feedback. I plan on producing the movie myself in the next three years, but until then, I'm trying my luck with some of those contests in the "I wrote a script now what" section.

Logline: In this dark comedy, Craig Walsh joins a homicidal scrapbooking club to cope with his failing relationship.

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State of Emergency

TITLE:
State of Emergency

GENRE:
Political Satire/Thriller/Black Comedy

R-Rating
Due to blood, guns, drugs, and heavy rock and roll.

My original intention was to make a fast-paced criticism of modern politics and create a memorable villain exploiting the classic American-film staple. Modern-Noir, 90's film school reject influence, and a heavy dose of Dr.Strangelove influences.

Anyone willing to give it a go or swap for feedback?

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Television Series Swaps

For anyone who has written more than one episode, or are planning to continue with their series post-Screnzy, post here to trade full continuity-reviewing.

If any of you have done this before, you know that it gets hard to find people to beta-read your scripts for continuity's sake, especially if it is long and in one go. So, post here, and get ready to trade episodes, or seasons, or pilots, christmas specials, or just general "I'll read what you've got if you read what I've got"

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Anyone Want To Swap and Critique?

Hey Screnziers!

Another Script Frenzy has come and gone, and I, for one, would LOVE to get some feedback on my latest creation (well, latest for Script Frenzy anyway...).

Anyone want to swap scripts and critiques? I'm an experienced film-maker (my first film comes out soon) who can offer tips on making a script camera-ready, if you'd like. Message me and let me know, or post here! This thread can also be used for others wanting to find critique partners!

- Taliesin

http://www.darkofmoon.com

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Visual Novel script! "What's that?", you say? Come and find out :D

Submitted by enchantedsleeper on May 2, 2011 - 08:01.

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Hey hey, everyone! So I'm looking for someone to read my (as yet nameless) Visual Novel script. It's very much unfinished, but I'm just interested to see what people make of it so far. Since this is a "script swap", I will quite happily swap scripts with anyone at all who wants to read mine, and give them feedback in return.

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Battle Of The Bands - Screenplay

Hello. Anyone interested in reading my script?

NAME -
Battle Of The Bands

RATING -
G - Some bullying, brief fight scenes

LENGTH -
90 pages. (soon to be finished)

CONCERNS -
This is a very fast pace script. I tried to cut down on time-taking jargon as much as possible so it would be more interesting. Although it may be a little too fast pace.

PLOT -
A boy's band faces the death of their best friend, a school bully, community service hours, and plagiarism accounts in the mist of playing at a very important conest: Battle Of The Bands.

CONTACT -
Frenzymail

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The Brief Immortals (Stage Musical)

The Brief Immortals
A Stage Musical

RATING:
PG-13 (for some swearing and references to drug use).

PLOT:
Three strangers are thrown together in pursuit of the shadowy Mr. Alias after a deadly toxin is released into the countryside.

LENGTH: 113 pgs.

CONCERNS:

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