Writer Profile: Jinie

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Location Union Lake, Mich... A place which does not exist.
Website http://jupiterheaven.com/*
Other interests Nanowrimo, Anime, manga, books, music, dance, games.
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Script type Screenplay
Script genre Sci-Fi/Fantasy
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FADE IN: A QUIET STEAMPUNK SUBURB Scene shows a suburb dotted with houses with odd contraptions. A brass machine tries to mow a lawn but only managing to destroy the flowerbeds. A woman tries to have her hair done by a machine and it comes out Afro. The scene focuses on a single house. It seems over run with gears and clockwork. Inside the house in the small bedroom a clock face with a steam whistle. KALEB sleeps through the ticking. Suddenly a quiet click sounds and the steam whistle blows and can be heard across the entire suburb. Several shots of houses of people scowling or yelling about the noise and then KALEB reaches up pulls a lever shutting off the whistle and turns over and falls asleep again. THE SKY. Flying through the sky with several backward glances, a pilot, who is difficult to determine the identity, (AERIS) zooms watching her back for pursuit. Distracted suddenly by the loud whistle she looks down in shock. She loses her concentration and control of her plane and crashes it into the house shortly after the whistle stops. The plane goes through the roof of the house and straight to the bedroom. AERIS gets thrown from the plane to the end of KALEB’s bed. AERIS (distracted) Where is it? She turns around and climbs back into the plane. KALEB begins to wake up and sits up. He is uncomfortably only decked in boxers and holds on to the blanket for decency. KALEB What… What are you doing in my house? AERIS (Over the shoulder and matter-of-factly) I crashed. KALEB Obviously. KALEB seems to be at a loss and still has not been able to see that it was a woman who crashed his house.

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