Writer Profile: Prollux Kohr

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Page Count
106 pages
Favorite films/plays

Star Wars, The Piano, The Fountain, Pan's Labyrinth, Myst series (I know, I know, its not one of the above, but it's very cinematic nonetheless), Kill Bill, The Cell, Law & Order, Ben Hur

Other interests

I am a fine art portraitist (mostly conte but I will use oils under duress), play the cello, and debate zealously in the Star Wars forums on the fallacies of the Jedi Order and the hidden truths behind the Sith.

Script title Mandalore's War
Script type Screenplay
Script genre Sci-Fi/Fantasy
Logline An original STAR WARS story set in the time of the Knights of the Old Republic
Main character would be played by Howie Long
My soundtrack would be written by John Wiliams, of course, but I think I would team him up with Lisa Gerrard, and/or Yo-Yo Ma.
An Excerpt from Mandalore's War

MAND’ALOR begins strutting.

MAND’ALOR
You’ve been lax, stagnating here in this rotting jungle while I’VE been out combing the stars for those of us still interested in taking what rightfully belongs to us. You would play with these... paltry beasts while we’ve been seizing colonies across the Outer Rim. We WILL take the Republic by storm. And I can offer you a place at my side. You’ve apparently warranted enough merit, with the number of men beneath your banner. What say you?

MANDALORE
(silent for a long pause)
I have my orders. I won’t relinquish them to you. You’re not worthy to lick Revan’s boots.

Mand'alor gives expression of "slightly taken aback" by the comment, cocks his head in "wonder at the context", another thoughtful pause, then nods (confirming he does know).

MAND’ALOR
I heard a... sordid rumor, and had wondered if it indeed were true, about you. I see now you attest to its veracity. All the more reason to relinquish your forces to me. You’re serving a lost cause, (derisive) ‘MANDALORE.’ If you will not hand your forces to me, then I will take them. Let us see to this, man to man.

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