How does this idea sound?

jeremyhung

Posted
Abril 13, 2008 - 3:06am

How does this idea sound?

Hey guys I wanted to know how this idea sounds.

A young screenwriter tries to get inspired by her daily life routine so she can write a good screenplay. She finally gets some ideas from relationship problems in real life, and tries entering it in competitions/ selling it. She gets terrible feedback and fights to improve her story. She is encouraged by family and friends.

I also need a nice title if anyone could come up with one :)

Jeremy

Manchester

178 pages

Posted
Abril 13, 2008 - 3:23am

RE: How does this idea sound?

Not that crash hot imo.

If you took one aspect of it, like the relationship problems, you could probably find a good story to tell about that.

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jeremyhung

Posted
Abril 13, 2008 - 4:00am

RE: How does this idea sound?

Yeah, I think I should base it on the relationship problems and not the screenwriting thing. That could be set aside so it's not the main theme.

Jeremy

k.r.johnson

21 pages

Posted
Mayo 29, 2008 - 10:09am

RE: How does this idea sound?

> I also need a nice title if anyone could come up with one

"Lord Jeremy of Buckingham"

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theanab

184 pages

Posted
Mayo 29, 2008 - 11:53am

RE: How does this idea sound?

Title:

Hung up on life