What sort of jokes...?

Neogeisha

10 pages

Posted
avril 2, 2008 - 12:49pm

What sort of jokes...?

Howdy fellers!

I'm curious, mainly cause while I think things are funny they usually arent...

What sorts of jokes do *YOU* guys find funny?

My script is (meant to be) a comical whodunnit kind of thing. The characters are all... shall we say stereotypical? of their roles really. At the moment, the funniest thing thats happened (IMO) is the maid being the one finding the dead man who she manages to set on fire and in an attempt to put it off, she manages to knock his head right off... with a feather duster.

Anyway, what sorts of things would you find funny in a whodunnit situation?

If needs be, i can provide people with the character list and roles.

Kthnxbai!

vbleghorn

24 pages

Posted
avril 2, 2008 - 4:22pm

RE: What sort of jokes...?

Comedy is subjective, but physical comedy is always a crowd pleaser. It sounds like you've already got that going for you. Some of the best physical comedy can be found in places like old Laurel and Hardy, and Marx Brothers movies. I suggest renting some of those and having an evening of brainstorming over a bowl of popcorn. They're proven material and likely to give you lots of ideas. Happy writing!!

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Arockr

100 pages

Posted
avril 3, 2008 - 11:08pm

RE: What sort of jokes...?

Don't forget Carol Burnett! Everyone on that show has such amazing physical comedy skills it's crazy. Look her up on youtube and they've got some good skits posted there. One of my favorites is something about a fun tour or something like that XD
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daeviant

4 pages

Posted
avril 4, 2008 - 11:18am

RE: What sort of jokes...?

The first "funny" moment in my screenplay is when the antagonist is lying on a deck chair beside his pool wearing a zebra striped speedo, and he's hairy and a little out of shape. He's on the phone talking about how he's not "in it for the money" and how he does it because he "cares". He then proceeds to yell at and berate his bultler becuase he didn't put enough rum in his pina colada.

I guess I'm using mostly visual humor, irony, and funny dialog.

Manchester

178 pages

Posted
avril 5, 2008 - 1:52am

RE: What sort of jokes...?

Corpse abuse is always good for a laugh. Many fine set-pieces have been written on that theme. Most recently part of "Death at a Funeral" if you like your movies home-grown.

Messing with taboos is funny, and appropriate for something that centres around a murder, which is a taboo itself. Watch almost any episode of "Californication" for shameless exploitation of taboo-centred humour.

Jokes about taboos are often distasteful - which is usually what makes them funny. Setting light to a dead person is funny because you just shouldn't do it, not before the cremation anyway. You have lots of potential follow up to that as well, in terms of the smell of burning flesh and people asking "is it bacon for breakfast today?" and so on.

If your characters are stereotypical, you should maybe look at comedy that goes against type.

Every catholic priest doesn't like boys, but there are enough that do to make jokes about it. But if you turned it around, so that either a boy really liked the priest and the priest was having to resist, or had a priest who liked really old women, you would be playing against type and with taboos. And could have a lot of fun.
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