Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

kookicat

100 pages

Posted
avril 6, 2008 - 3:56pm

Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

This is a goond thing, right? I'm not sure why- nothing has really happened yet... just the setting is creepy enough. *shiver* And it's not like I've never writted horror before. Hmm... maybe it's possessed? ;) Darn thing came roaring into my head like an express train.

BigEddieCalzone

71 pages

Posted
avril 6, 2008 - 4:02pm

RE: Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

Then congratulations are due! Even Stephen King says he writes about the things that scare him the most. If you can't sleep after writing, then neither will your audience after seeing.

Don't be afraid to let it all out. Don't censor yourself. Don't allow your fear to overtake your writing. Give it everything.

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kookicat

100 pages

Posted
avril 6, 2008 - 4:19pm

RE: Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

Heh, thanks. :)

I really need to go to bed, but this darn thing is just pouring from my brain. I want to get it down. :)

Hmm, I might have to sleep with the light on.

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Laralynzy

105 pages

Posted
avril 6, 2008 - 5:33pm

RE: Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

That's brilliant! Let it pour, let it pour, let it pour! Go with it. Gotta get it down while it's flowing.

I have been stumped getting started and only started my script today... so I'm a bit behind. But think I am on the right track at last.

Good luck... er... or should that be break a nib?

kookicat

100 pages

Posted
avril 7, 2008 - 9:31am

RE: Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

Thanks. I'm the same- I've just started this (as you can see.)

Break a nib- I like that! :)

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Scott Gardener

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Posted
avril 15, 2008 - 11:02pm

RE: Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

Anything yet?

I can't boast the same frightful insomnia, though I did get a feeling of "this is coming out a lot more intense and powerful than I expected" when working on the second episode of mine.

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thesnowleopard

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Posted
avril 17, 2008 - 3:57am

RE: Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

I have trouble figuring out the intensity of what I write these days because I don't usually feel it as much as my audience. I creep people out with stuff that I think is pretty mild.

But I gotta admit, every time I write a scene where I have to describe shadow people, I get creeped out. And I always get inspired in the wee hours, which just makes it worse.

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Posted
mai 7, 2008 - 8:55am

RE: Ick. Only a few pages in and my script's freaking me out

I go through that....
I feel guilty in writing this stuff, "What is wrong with me? Why do I come up with this stuff?"

So then I start trying to make my story more clean cut, but then, I ask myself, is that horrifying?

For example, the "creepy guy" just gets off the bus at night and follows the female main character...sure, that's creepy

as opposed to- the female gets off the bus to escape the creep, then the bus stops and we see the bus driver's lifeless hand drop out the front as we now realize that the "creep" is much more terrifying, he has killed someone....and then steps out the back door and begins to chase the helpless lead female...

...MORE terrifying, scarier, because we have now seen that this person is terrifying and dangerous, not just creepy...this is where the drama comes from- the level of drama is equal to the level of peril your lead character is in...therefore, with horror, the amount of drama you get from the story also depends upon the level of danger/creepiness posed by the monster/villian

There are many ways to make the villian scary without showing gore....I am opposed to gore, I wont ever write that....like many have said, it is always much scarier what the audience imagines than what you throw in their face - less is more (Jaws, for example)