So i finally wrote the last few scenes of my screenplay. i need to start editing and would like to get feedback on my script. anyone willing to read it and cut it to pieces??

the screenplay is a story-behind-the-story version of Rapunzel.

thanks!

I have got quite a bit of free time on my hands this summer, and your plot sounds interesting. I've done some editing in the past, mostly for friends and a literary magazine that I work on, so I think that I'd do well with this. (At least, I hope so. I promise to do my utmost.) I'd be happy to help.
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There's manga. And then there's a social life. Guess which I choose?

it's posted on project central on celtx. here's the link:

http://pc.celtx.com/search?q=tower+view&c=&o=rel

if you can't access it that way, just email me and i'll send you the pdf.

plumeriaflower@yahoo.com

I can access it. I'll get to work.
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There's manga. And then there's a social life. Guess which I choose?

Sounds absolutely brilliant!

"And what if I wave my wand and nothing happens?" asked Harry.
"Throw it away and punch him in the nose," suggested Ron.

Everybody finished the song at different times. At last, only the Weasley twins were left singing along to a very slow funeral mar

So I just finished writing a play, and I think it's awsome but really I do need a second opinion.
The story revolves around two actors playing different characters, and I think it's a feel good play. Anybody up to it?