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Page Count
60 pages
Age 35
Location Staffordshire, England
Script title Tears for Heaven
Script type Comic
Script genre Sci-Fi/Fantasy
My script is Heroes meets Buffy the Vampire Slayer
An Excerpt from Tears for Heaven

Page Nineteen:

Panel One:
Inside the gym Beth is standing there with a flame balanced above one hand while she offers the gremlins a tupperware box full of cakes and biscuits with the other. The gremlins have turned to look at her.

Dialogue:

Beth: Hey, little folk, why don’t you stop what you’re doing and have something to eat while we talk?

Gremlin One: Girl sees us she does. Bad this is.

Gremlin Two: Will you please talk properly? It’s very annoying when you do that.

Gremlin Three: She’s got cake – we should at least listen to her.

Panel Two:
The gremlins are sitting round eating the cake. The rest of the group have come in and are sitting around.

Dialogue:

Lindy: You have to stop damaging the gym equipment. You’re going to hurt somebody.

Gremlin Two: So?

Gremlin One: Kind of the idea that is. Deserve it they do.

Gremlin Two: Stop that!

Gremlin Three: And if we don’t stop?

Panel Three:
Sarah has covered her mouth and her shoulders are shaking with laughter.

Panel Four:
Lindy has a determined expression on her face. Gremlin two looks angry.

Dialogue:

Lindy: If you won’t stop we’ll have to stop you.

Gremlin One: Stop us you will? Like to see that I would.

Gremlin Two: Right!

Panel Five:
Gremlin one and gremlin two involved in a fist fight while the other gremlins and the group of teens look on with various expressions of surprise and shock.

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